By doing this Jarvis cocker task it has taught me what needs to be put on the front of a magazine, by getting feedback from helen it's helped me to realise what I now need to add to the front cover of my own magazine. To try and improve my Jarvis cocker task I could have put more sell lines and an enigma code on the front of the magazine. Also could have used a brighter colour scheme to jump out to my audience more I could of also put the main sell line across the middle of the magazine cover to stand out to the audience and to name the person on the front cover. I took this into consideration to add to the front of my own front cover when I make it.


Well done Holly - I like to see that you have taken my feedback on board and looked at how you will apply that feedback to your actual product!!!! Well done !!
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